[Bleach] [G] Maybe; Yachiru

[grassangel]

Title: Maybe

Series: Bleach
Genre: Introspective
Rating: G
Characters: Yachiru
Note: I found about 60 words of this on a piece of paper I keep on my bedside table for midnight moments of inspiration. One of the annotations made to the side of the paper was "And Yachiru will take over from Yama-ji". Don't know why I wrote it, but it must have been in response to how deep this piece seems.

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Maybe I was brought up by the wrong person.


I've seen enough blood to fill an ocean,
people who run blindly into battle thinking it's honourable.
They're wrong.

Human life shouldn't be thrown away.
Life is not about power, about who's strongest. 

It's not a competition, you do not have to win.
Just finish.

We need to respect it, to take of every single thing.
You should want the best for a person, for them to be the best they can.

Don't sacrifice it uselessly or let it go to waste.
Help those who need it, let them learn, let them grow.
Let them be great.


Maybe I was brought up by the right person.

Comments

[lina-kun.livejournal.com]

Very nice. I don't know a whole lot about Yachiru, so I can't delve much into characterization, but I thought it was quite lovely.

[grass-angel.livejournal.com]

What episode have you watched most recently? And you should've read chapter 114 by now.

But thanks anyway.

No other feedback?

[glass-houses.livejournal.com]

What other feedback could you possibly be looking for?

[grass-angel.livejournal.com]

like if it's too philosophical for Yachiru or not quite her.

[lina-kun.livejournal.com]

Eh, I don't remember what the last episode I watched was. I just finished chapter 149, though. *nods*

Grammatically it was fine. The piece itself was mediocre. *shrugs*

[shadowsinfire.livejournal.com]

Wai... scary O_o. definitely Future!Yachiru, not current.

[grass-angel.livejournal.com]

Scary? o_O I didn't mean for it to be scary.
I only see Yachiru being a bit older. But a bit could probably be five years so...

[shadowsinfire.livejournal.com]

Well, it is kinda scary. Might just have been cos I was in a weird mood. And I think five years would be enough.

[grass-angel.livejournal.com]

Five years in the current situation certainly.

[shadowsinfire.livejournal.com]

Certainly.